1. Strong, clear speaking voice. 2. You covered all of the required information. 3. You related a lot of interesting facts 1. That she unofficially served as president when her husband was sick. 2. That she was the first first lady to personally visit European royalty. 3. That she hosted concerts while a first lady. 4. That she was a stepmother to her husband’s children 4. Content wise, you presentation included more than any that I have listened to so far.
Weaknesses
1. You had such strong content, yet the effect was lessened by many misproununctiations. Examples include :
a. The name Edith b. aristocracy c. jeweler d. Presbyterian
You should look up these words in the dictionary or ask someone how they are pronounced. I would have given you an A+ but for this.
Strengths
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2. You covered all of the required information.
3. You related a lot of interesting facts
1. That she unofficially served as president when her husband was sick.
2. That she was the first first lady to personally visit European royalty.
3. That she hosted concerts while a first lady.
4. That she was a stepmother to her husband’s children
4. Content wise, you presentation included more than any that I have listened to so far.
Weaknesses
1. You had such strong content, yet the effect was lessened by many misproununctiations.
Examples include :
a. The name Edith
b. aristocracy
c. jeweler
d. Presbyterian
You should look up these words in the dictionary or ask someone how they are pronounced. I would have given you an A+ but for this.